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    Bike Racing Games

    Here is a new website I started, that contains only bike racing games and racing games in general. The site is new and it does not contain much content. I still have to fix a few things. Please let me know what do you think about it and what I should change to make it better...

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    Well.........
    Domain is BIKE and your header logo is a truck jump? Other than that, not a bad start....simplistic site
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    Well, I don't have my own site yet. So perhaps I should keep my mouth shut... But my comments:

    - First of all Ricky is right: You position yourself as a "bike"-game (considering your URL) but then in your description line you mention truck & car games.

    - About your description line: try to do something about the English. I'm not English myself so maybe it's just me but that sentence really doesn't read fluently. Perhaps you should change it to something like:

    Welcome to Bike Racing Games. Here you can find the finest selection of online racing games. Check out all kinds of bike, truck and car games.
    I don't wanna say this intro is "correct" or anything like that. But just the ending of your last phrase doesn't make any sense 'speeding up and performing tricks'. However, first listen to other native speakers 'cause it might just be my wrong opinion!
    Next to that I would definitely change the begin of the phrase into "Here you can find" (like i mentioned up here) instead of 'you can find here'.

    Wish you the best with your site and perhaps in the future we might become link partners?

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    Site is simple and clean, that is good... take a care about your keyword density...

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